5 stars for the Jill sandwich reference. I laughed way harder than I should for that, lol.

This sounds really rough and not enough bass in a lot of parts... Good try though.

Not bad. This is the kind of stuff I would expect in the Guilty Gear XX soundtrack, though not quite as good. No offense. This could use some fine-tuning here and there, but overall, this is pretty badass! I always loved this theme, and whilst a good rendition of it, NOT QUITE there yet. It's missing a little more punch from the drums, and the trumpet section really didn't do it for me; it felt unnecessary. The slow part of the song is actually well-done, and for it to lead back into what I can only describe as pure audio-orgasmic bliss, I felt like the song as a whole could be better. LOVED your guitar solo, though. Fucking rad! Great work, could use a bit of fine-tuning, but well-done nonetheless.

I haven't even heard the full song, and I already love everything about it! The range, passion, and overall quality honestly blew away any expectations I had with this song, being posted on Newgrounds and all. Seriously... The amount of shit on this portal is enough to drive a man insane! Anyway, EXCELLENT job, and I am certainly a HUGE fan of MGS 3, and the MGS franchise in general.

Facial anatomy is off, the way the tongues are working is way off, and the coloring and shading is very unimpressive at best. I just don't see how this piece is supposed to work. I mean, the angles are kinda... MEH, and leave too much to the imagination. Perhaps if you showed what was going on from a different angle, more of the characters were revealed and the anatomy, coloring, and shading made an improvement, I could see this getting into the art portal, but as of right now, no. I don't see it here. Perhaps next time.

If I were to make some recommendations for improvement, try looking for a specific pose you want to draw, and draw it a few dozen times, until you feel confident enough that you have it right. Repetitive drawing of the same thing repeatedly can ensure minimal mistakes, and may help you discover new ways to draw characters. However, as a word of caution, make sure you're using SOLID references, either via photos, or use Posemaniacs, etc. MAKE SURE you're not just copying either, though. Use the references I mentioned, and then try and put your own spin on it. Don't just copy, but learn from references. I know it's helped me before, and I am sure it will do some major good for you as well.

They do when I play Mercy (I suck at playing Mercy). Anyway, this is easily really good. I really don't know what else to say about it.

Should have drawn her with EVA Unit-01. I mean, DVA's already wearing a plugsuit, so why not?